Hi all, I've been working on this side project a while now (very slowly) and while I realise that only a few pages is not really enough to crit, any feedback is welcome.

Oh, and this comic contains nudity and a bit of violence for good measure, so kiddies, go find a nice safe comic to play with, kay?

I know I am not meant to bump this until a month has gone past, but I thought it may be important to, say, include the website.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Demons_Soul/index.php?p=465089

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Ok, I'm not to good at critiquing but I really liked the first few pages of Demon Soul, it kept me interested and wondering what is going to happen next. I liked the art and the story telling so I have no complaints about it. To me it is really good.

It actually looks pretty good. :o

A lot of the pages were very funny ^^ and you definitely had my attention, wondering what would happen next.

This looks really promising so far.

My only suggestion is to brush up on your art a bit. Sometimes the style changes suddenly with the girl's hair or the man's face. But that's to be expected at the beginning. Once you become more used to drawing your characters, I'm sure you'll be able to keep them consistent.

Ha, good call, pastel.

Actually I started this comic to improve my drawing - was never meant to make it mainstream, it just kinda grew. I AM hoping that as I go on the art will settle as my skills improve - fingers crossed!