Well then, it's been about 50 pages since my first thread so here's another. My art style and other things have progressed since then. So, tell me, how am I doing? Anything you think could be better?


Before you complain about the Spanish, know that it is pretty much butchered nonsense and is not necessary to "get" the comic.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Lacerated_Veil/

Can I complain about your Spanish being crap? Although the fact that it's in Spanish, and bad Spanish at that, does seem to make the strip funnier.

The jokes are kind of hit or miss, but they're hitting often enough for me to keep reading. Especially the two comic anniversary one.

A lot of them are more clever than funny, but I actually prefer those ones.

Excellent. And, as I said, the Spanish IS crap. That's the way I like it.