Hey everyone!
I recently decided to post my comic up on DrunkDuck and I figured I'd come here to plug it and ask for any advice as to what I should do to improve my art/story and to gather more readers. As soon as I posted some pages I realized a lot of them are a little too big, so I'm going to try to make them a little smaller from now on.

The comic can be found here: http://www.drunkduck.com/Metal_Breakdown/

The comic is about a boy named Randy who tragically lost his dad and his own arm in a mysterious accident. Randy now wishes to find out what really caused his father's death and to resume his dad's skilled work with robotics by creating the very first sentient android. He succeeds, but there are still a LOT of bugs to work out.

Thanks for reading!

Just bumping this thread as I have some more recent pages up for critique :D

Wow, that's nice stuff. I really like your character designs.

It's you! It's yoooooooou

I love your comic also. :}

Thank you very much for looking! :D

Aww thanks! I love yours too and I can't wait for more pages! So this is where ya found me huh? ;D

Bumping again!

Also Metal Breakdown now updates on a weekly basis on Wednesdays, usually at 3pm Eastern Time.
Thanks for looking!

Cute and dark at the same time. You've pulled that off very well. Nice character art, clean and slick.

Thanks so much! I really appreciate it =)

Quick bump again as the comic is moving along nicely ;D

Just gonna bump this... Hope that's okay! >_>

I suggest you put a link in your tag (so people on the forums don't need to click through your profile just to take a gander at your comic). As for your actual comic though, I thought it had some very clean lines and clean colors. Nicely done

Hey thanks a lot!! I added a banner, hope its not too annoying haha =)