Interested in what people have to say etc. and evaluations

Good art and colouring you got there. No real negatives that I see other than just a little messyness of the lines (which I personally like).

Othewise, no big problems.

Your narration is good, text is legible, and speech bubbles look fantastic. Overall, comic is worth a read.

Thanks!

I say the same. The narration is done well and the art looks good. This is kind of sad at the moment and I wonder if you're going to stay with this sad overtone or if you are going to do a 180 and make everything happy. Either way, I think I'm going to follow this series.

Thanks for the comment
I'm going to try and perk things up a bit in a few pages but the story is a bit up and down...mainly down