Also, I'm looking for constructive crit, so if you have anything to say about my comic, go ahead and post it either here or in the comments on the comic itself. ^^
The art improves a whole bunch as the story progresses.
At first it was a bit inexpressive, but by chapter three they're all emoting a lot
better. I think the story is quite interesting too!
One thing I'd say that needs more work is the backgrounds. Perhaps they're a bit too simple. (I know, backgrounds are very hard to draw, but hey, you said we should crit this) And maybe a bit more of attention to the anatomy.