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Mar 18,`08 8:36pm | Quote |

The Comic
Angelfish is the story of a girl with no memory, the people she meets, and the world and circumstances she is inextricably connected to.

A sci-fi/fantasy webcomic about being lost, getting found, and finding the way home.

Angelfish.

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Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated

 
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Apr 25,`08 11:07am | Quote |

It's been more than a month, plus I updated the comic today, so I'm bumping this thread up.

 
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May 29,`08 4:29am | Quote |

Monthly bump.

 
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May 29,`08 7:38am | Quote |

Well, I like the comic. Especially the art.

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Jun 15,`08 2:08pm | Quote |

I also like this comic
Yay Angelfish!!

Timmy And the Bleach

There are many things in this world that are uncertain
I'd say I'm one of them
But I'm not sure
 
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Aug 9,`08 12:51am | Quote |

Thanks, guys!

(I keep forgetting about this thread, haha.)

Another bump. :D

 
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Sep 19,`08 3:27am | Quote |

Bumping this topic as it's been over a month. :]

Also, I'm looking for constructive crit, so if you have anything to say about my comic, go ahead and post it either here or in the comments on the comic itself. ^^

 
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Dec 5,`08 5:56pm | Quote |

AF updated today, plus it's been a while since I bumped this thread... So, bump

 
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Dec 6,`08 7:36am | Quote |

The art improves a whole bunch as the story progresses.
At first it was a bit inexpressive, but by chapter three they're all emoting a lot
better. I think the story is quite interesting too!
One thing I'd say that needs more work is the backgrounds. Perhaps they're a bit too simple. (I know, backgrounds are very hard to draw, but hey, you said we should crit this) And maybe a bit more of attention to the anatomy.

 
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Feb 17,`09 7:01pm | Quote |

This reply is kinda late, but anyway... Thanks, Ludeshka I agree, my backgrounds need work.

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Bumping this up since it's been... what... two months? Plus I updated the comic yesterday - three new pages.

 
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Jun 19,`09 9:17pm | Quote |

Comic has been updated.


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