The second alliance is a high fantasy comic by me and aidish.
We're still really new to all of this stuff so we would really like some comments and tips to help us improve

just click here: http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Second_Alliance/


thanks in advance

great job, It's nice to see you implement your own style. I'm fairly new to this web-comics thing myself and if I had any tips to improve, on what i've learnt so far during my short term here. I would say never try to rush out your pages (not that i'm implying you do ofcourse) Its just something I would have changed about my own comics given a second chance. Also I would say try not to be influenced by anyone elses work. You are your own man, it's your show, it's your stage. Always question why your doing something on a page (are you doing it to be contravercial, doing it to be different or are you doing it because it feels right and it feels like you) Start every page as a blank piece of paper and do what YOU do best with it. You seem to be doing fine with that so far, so keep to your own style - it's graet and i'll definetly check in on your comic to see how it comes along. It probably didn't but I hope this helped....keep up the good work

thanks for the comment
glad you liked our comic