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Jan 27,`08 2:03pm | Quote |

http://www.drunkduck.com/Lacerated_Veil/

Please critique my comic on everything. Including sex appeal.
Safe for work though people might give you strange looks.

"You would not feel sadness
If you never tasted joy
That's the curse of humans,
Born in passion you destroy"
 
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Jan 27,`08 2:13pm | Quote |

The rainbow suicide scene reminds me of Perry Bible Fellowship (that's a good thing). For a stick figure, pretty good artwork. I'll be looking into it.

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Jan 27,`08 2:17pm | Quote |

"Xela267" Said:

The rainbow suicide scene reminds me of Perry Bible Fellowship (that's a good thing). For a stick figure, pretty good artwork. I'll be looking into it.

Hurrah.

"You would not feel sadness
If you never tasted joy
That's the curse of humans,
Born in passion you destroy"
 
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Jan 27,`08 3:05pm | Quote |

Well the stick figure art is very nice, the jokes are poor.
.....
Actually all the jokes were poor because half is in spanish(I only understand some spanish), and you use babel fish to translate so I found that very odd. Upload an english version.

 
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Jan 27,`08 3:52pm | Quote |

"Skullbie" Said:

Well the stick figure art is very nice, the jokes are poor.
.....
Actually all the jokes were poor because half is in spanish(I only understand some spanish), and you use babel fish to translate so I found that very odd. Upload an english version.



The jokes are physical. The dialogue is pretty much whatever is on my mind at that moment or hidden messages.


Oh and they're all in Spanish.

This post was last edited on Jan 28,`08 2:46pm

"You would not feel sadness
If you never tasted joy
That's the curse of humans,
Born in passion you destroy"

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