Went and read it- preparing my CC Knife and Fork of Doom!
Didn't need 'em, put the silverware away!
Overall great- not highbrow, not actual "comic-booky", but funny, sometimes random as heck, and almost always entertaining.
The only character (besides video game characters) who stands out is Rusty- by way of the hat. Do the other little round headed fellas not get names?
There were a few typos/misspellings, but nothing glaring. I really dig the art style with the lil' round head Pillsbury doughboy peoples, it seem to be getting popular. The greytone looks good, and makes occasional colored object stand out- a la Sin City...
Again, overall, great strip.
Oh yeah, your link up there didn't work on my PC...dunno why. HTML coding problem? I navigated over on my own.
Went and read it- preparing my CC Knife and Fork of Doom!
Didn't need 'em, put the silverware away!
Overall great- not highbrow, not actual "comic-booky", but funny, sometimes random as heck, and almost always entertaining.
The only character (besides video game characters) who stands out is Rusty- by way of the hat. Do the other little round headed fellas not get names?
There were a few typos/misspellings, but nothing glaring. I really dig the art style with the lil' round head Pillsbury doughboy peoples, it seem to be getting popular. The greytone looks good, and makes occasional colored object stand out- a la Sin City...
Again, overall, great strip.
Oh yeah, your link up there didn't work on my PC...dunno why. HTML coding problem? I navigated over on my own.
Holy Carp! I was wondering where you came from! There's a few things I'd like to change (Or have already changed on my computer) on the comic, but for some reason when I re-submit the page on the edit page, it doesn't go through. I really don't want to delete the page and re-submit them either.
Well the general rule of Thumb is, if they're bald, and there's no distinguishing features on the character, they have no name and are otherwise un-important.
For example - Yakisoba has is baldING, and has glasses.
Also I fixed the link. There was a space between the tag on the URL.
Thanks for the critique!
This post was last edited on Jan 20,`08 2:45pm
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