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Jan 19,`08 11:14pm | Quote |

I could think of no better time than to do one of these things than right now. So here it goes.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Soda_Bread/

have fun kids.

This post was last edited on Jan 20,`08 2:45pm

I'm Jon. You can call me Dr. Jon... but I prefer Jon since I'm not really a Doctor.

 
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Jan 20,`08 1:47pm | Quote |

Went and read it- preparing my CC Knife and Fork of Doom!

Didn't need 'em, put the silverware away!

Overall great- not highbrow, not actual "comic-booky", but funny, sometimes random as heck, and almost always entertaining.

The only character (besides video game characters) who stands out is Rusty- by way of the hat. Do the other little round headed fellas not get names?

There were a few typos/misspellings, but nothing glaring. I really dig the art style with the lil' round head Pillsbury doughboy peoples, it seem to be getting popular. The greytone looks good, and makes occasional colored object stand out- a la Sin City...

Again, overall, great strip.

Oh yeah, your link up there didn't work on my PC...dunno why. HTML coding problem? I navigated over on my own.

 
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Jan 20,`08 2:44pm | Quote |

"Trickster74" Said:

Went and read it- preparing my CC Knife and Fork of Doom!

Didn't need 'em, put the silverware away!

Overall great- not highbrow, not actual "comic-booky", but funny, sometimes random as heck, and almost always entertaining.

The only character (besides video game characters) who stands out is Rusty- by way of the hat. Do the other little round headed fellas not get names?

There were a few typos/misspellings, but nothing glaring. I really dig the art style with the lil' round head Pillsbury doughboy peoples, it seem to be getting popular. The greytone looks good, and makes occasional colored object stand out- a la Sin City...

Again, overall, great strip.

Oh yeah, your link up there didn't work on my PC...dunno why. HTML coding problem? I navigated over on my own.

Holy Carp! I was wondering where you came from! There's a few things I'd like to change (Or have already changed on my computer) on the comic, but for some reason when I re-submit the page on the edit page, it doesn't go through. I really don't want to delete the page and re-submit them either.

Well the general rule of Thumb is, if they're bald, and there's no distinguishing features on the character, they have no name and are otherwise un-important.

For example - Yakisoba has is baldING, and has glasses.

Also I fixed the link. There was a space between the tag on the URL.

Thanks for the critique!

This post was last edited on Jan 20,`08 2:45pm

I'm Jon. You can call me Dr. Jon... but I prefer Jon since I'm not really a Doctor.

 
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Jan 25,`08 4:37pm | Quote |

Also Peoples...

Don't forget to vote for the Mayor.

http://www.drunkduck.com/community/view_topic.php?tid=38904&cid=236

I'm Jon. You can call me Dr. Jon... but I prefer Jon since I'm not really a Doctor.


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