I'm not sure what you're shooting for, or what you're expecting in critique, but I'll give you my thoughts.
It seems very rushed, like you wanted to spend an hour or less on it. If that's the case it shows, and why would anyone want to read something that you yourself didn't put effort into? Putting a dark outline doesn't cut it. A ruler would do you well. What's p with the lettering? Hand lettering is fine, but either have it all on an angle or have it straight. Not both. The different page sizes from day to day to day is a tad frustrating.
It's funny, hoo-damn it's funny, I liked it alot. I really think it's only going to get better as you continue.