Well golly gee guys, hi. I hope I'm posting this in the right forum category (I was unsure whether to put this here or in tips and tricks...) I'm still trying to figure out what I should change for the "second season" of AHM, and I don't want to post this up until I get some opinions on it. Any suggestions make me totally happy. This here is the first page of Lack of Ethics. Now, I have some questions for you:

Is the backdrop nice or should I just use a solid black, instead? How are the fonts? Does the style look all right? Do the nonblack outlines look cool? Did you lol? Anything else?

Now with [a horrible attempt at] shading.

http://www.deviantart.com/download/71134026/LOE_1_1_unfinished_by_Ru_chan.png

Backdrop is a little busy - I'm not sure if you should go to solid black (the tone of the comic seems to require more colour), but a nice solid colour or gradient might work better than the random spattering of colour you've got now.

Shading looks alright to me, as do the outlines, and it made me smile.

Thank you very much, I'll surely consider that! Maybe lowering the opacity of the designs in the back would have the same effect.

I'm beginning to think I should have put this in "Hey look what I did". Whoopsie. Well, a mod will move it if they see fit.

fonts look nice, and comparing that style with the style on your banner, I would say that shades really add quality to it, looks on a whole new level. And I agree with Frostflowers