The puns and wordplay are cheesy, yet clever. I find it amusing. Pardon me for say this, but... If you could draw better, that would be good. I'm not asking for some insanely high-detailed image. No-- that would take away from the comic's main purpose. It's wordplay, not graphic art, we're talking about. Again, the drawings don't need to be good, or even mediocre, as long as the humor is conveyed.