Twas a long time ago, longer now than it seems,
In a place that perhaps you have seen in your dreams.
For the story that is about to unfurl,
is about how the Boogie Man came to our world,
Now you've probably wondered how this came around,
Well, it all started, one day, in Halloween Town.



The Nightmare Before Christmas The Pumpkin Prince

Well, usually people won't critique a comic unless it has 20 pages. Or at least more than 4. You have to give people something to critique.

But as far as I can say. I wasn't a big fan of the movie, and I don't see what all the hype is about, but you nailed that kind of drawing that the movie... wait the movie was a claymation...

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Good job on the art!

Cool!

You're right. sorry about that. ^_^; I'm still working on the pages I've got about 10 done but I'm uplioading them 2 a day. The art style is an imitation of Tim Burton's original Drawings for the movie which inspired the stop motion dolls and locations of the movie. Thanks for checking it out and for the compliment!

Very nice job on the art. I always did love sketchy comics.

Thanks

Okay you've got me intrigued...

Should be interesting to see where this goes!

Ok now I've got more posted than the original 4 pages. I've got the first scene up. Thanks for reading guys and I welcome any and all Critques.

Almost done. Anymore critques?

I wish there was no music but it's a great comic!

The comic is good, but please get rid of the music. There are a few good reasons for this:
1. When somebody is reading a webcomic, they're going to only stay on each page for a number of seconds before pressing the 'next' button, this means they're going to get a little bit of the intro of a song every page unless they really feel like hanging around for a while to listen, but if your comic is interesting, they'd probably rather read that.
2. If anybody is reading in their school computer room or library, it could be disastrous.
3. It forces people to turn off the music they want to listen to on iTunes or whatever to read your comic.
4.If people wanted to listen to the soundtrack of TNBC to set the mood while reading, they'd probably be big enough fans to already own the soundtrack.

Embedded music is rarely a good idea on a webpage. Your comic is really good, so that's really the only bit of crit I have right now.

Cool Thanks folks ^_^

all finished up with. Hope everyone had a good Halloween