Check out my comic the 3rd.

Its about war, fighting, magic, And a few individual's whose lives will change greatly. Its not quite done yet but check it out and tell me what you think.

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ITS MAYYYYY check out the comic!

Sept 02?!
Up to page 90 soon, then ten more till 100!!

Lol, I have the same problem with people giving crits. Course I only been here 4 days, but I feel your pain.
As for crit, beautiful work, enthralling action. My only problems are the chapters are really friggin long. I know everything's already done, but a typical book shouldn't be longer than 48 pages.
And your font doesn't really match the tone of the story. It's a little thing, but something less whimsical would have been better. And the bubbles can be kinda jarring since everything is very grey and the bubbles are BOOM! WHITE! Not sure how to fix that though,
Well done otherwise. Recommended.

You seem to have a very nice job here, i just belive the coloring is way to dark, i understand you might wanted to give the story this sort of atmosphere, but i belive it makes the story hard to follow sometimes, still you have a lot of potential and hope you keep up with the good work.