So Chapter 3 finished today and I'm looking for some pointers on improvement (as I am every chapter).
The last two I asked specifically for feedback on the art but now I don't mind. My writing needs a lot of work too, it's just that before my art was definitely the weaker of the two.
Any tips anyone could give would be received very gratefully, although they won't be used until Chapter 5 (I've nearly finished drawing Chapter 4 already).

Gah, bumping without saying 'bump' is hard, especially when there aren't any new updates.
I do have a bonus art scheduled for Monday, so I'll mention that instead.

Still need crit though. XD