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Sep 4,`07 1:07am | Quote |

hello

I raised my comic ANGELOU chapter #1 in English, also I think to throw the chapter two in English earlier

my comic earlier was in Spanish, but not many people speak or read Spanish here, so I decided traslated to English. my English is not very good, and sometimes I have problems with the grammar,

i hope your should understand. thank you and visit my comics


the chapter one
http://www.drunkduck.com/ANGELOU_Euridine/index.php?p=272609

and the chapter two
http://www.drunkduck.com/ANGELOU_Galadriel/index.php?p=270284


This post was last edited on Sep 4,`07 7:51pm

 
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Sep 4,`07 8:31am | Quote |

Wow...
Your bad English is a real shame because that is some first-rate artwork. It's too bad that I can't really comment on the writing as well. Do you know anybody who can translate better?
Maybe you could ask in 'Networking And Community Projects' for a translator? There has to be at least one person on this site who can translate Spanish to English well. I'd do it but I only know about 3 words of Spanish. XD

Really, if the translating was better I could see this as a professional work. =O

(Also, you don't need to post chapters separately. You can put them all in the same comic and mark the first page of each chapter as a chapter page.)

This post was last edited on Sep 4,`07 8:35am

Currently rewriting Pictures from the start - and it is now called In Carnate.
 
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Sep 4,`07 12:07pm | Quote |

thank you,

I can understand English, but in the grammar ..... iam very bad.... O_O ..

I have many problems in accommodating the words ..... since Spanish and English do not take the same order XD
more that at, all I cannot translate the particular idioms of Spanish, or phrases in past and future ... are my biggest problem U_U


oooh the chapters, rather there would be season's, not chapters, the chapter would be of approximately 20 pages, and mine are 80, alone that it calls them chapters instead of season's......te hehehehe

better I change that to them so that there are confusions


thanks for the critiqued, and watch my comic ...XD

jeje I hope that they should have understood me with my bad English!


que tengan un buen dia!!


 
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Sep 4,`07 3:58pm | Quote |

Your art is strong. Nice job!

 
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Sep 6,`07 2:43am | Quote |




Thanks polo!!

I hope you like my comic!


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