"The Lamp"

My comic is written both in Japanese and English (because i started as my English practice The pictures are simple hand-drawings, and the story goes on rather peacefully although whats happning is pretty caothic:P I think ull enjoy it if u like fantacy, disney animation (coz a friend of mine told me it reminds her of disney) or a easy comic with many serious issues in it

http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Lamp_1/

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I think that the English is excellent. You have very good spelling and grammar. I'll leave notes on pages where I see mistakes, but there aren't many. I think you write better than many native speakers!

The style surprised me, because you don't draw like most Japanese people, it looks like how I'd expect American cartoon art to look, but that's not a bad thing (I'm an English person who draws inspiration from Japanese manga!) you use the style very well.

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Why can't I write Japanese on this stupid forum!? ARGH. >_<; It's all just a mess of punctuation!