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Aug 27,`07 10:15pm | Quote |

NOW that school is back in session, YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS!!! thats right! MORE AWESOME! I will be updating more frequently now. like once every two days.
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Join the youth Robert "Bob" Pallaggi as he searches for the elusive "BlurpleBerries" so that he can train under the watchful eye of Creig the insane bum, Bob's sole reason is that he wants cookies.

Watch as the heroic police man Johnnathon B. Law prepares to catch the nefarious BrainHead and Taterman, a team of BAD GUYS (oh no!) , and the sinister Ninja, whose real identity is still a mystery!

Laugh at the halarious antics of the good Professor and his son as they try to fix a horrible experiment gone wrong!

Be taken to far off and whimsical lands where epic battles are fought and stange men eat big piles of POOPY CAKES.

Did you think these stories were all not related? well then you are horribly mistaken my good friend! find out how they all tie together in Jeff Panczaks' epic



TCCPC




(in theaters november 14th) (rated T for teen+ for swearwords and the occasional man-boob)





just click on my link down thar.


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Aug 30,`07 7:21am | Quote |

Had a flick through, some pretty promising stuff but I would be more inclined to read it if it was more polished. NAMELY;

1)More accessible plot. I don't really want to go right back the the start to get into it. The stuff at the beginning isn't really that appealing to read.

2)Clean up the art. Draw it larger and have a shot at inking it.

3)Take more time one the lettering and make sure the dialogue is coherent.

 
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Sep 1,`07 2:49pm | Quote |

Dont listen to that guy! You comic is awesome in everyway! Its has halarity in each page so no need to even look back. The pencil art is funtastic and so freeformed and the dialouge is the wackiest best thing out there.

Good stuff!

"I've carried you as far as I can brother, The rest of the journey is up to you."

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Sep 2,`07 2:57am | Quote |

Ho-kay then. But if you want your comic to improve, because quite frankly I can see the promise, then I would pay some heed...

 
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Sep 2,`07 8:23am | Quote |

GOD THIS IS AWESOME!!!

NOW UPDATING!!!

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