The next one,this is about my second manga and may your bodey rest in peace,
write what you want,openfor everything.
just please if you can`t stand shonen-ai/yaoi,dont see my manga and don`t insult it.
if you like shonen-ai you are alowed to critic it.

All in all good job... on some of your earlier pages, the starbursts are on a layer over the text, making it hard to read. The color is very vivid, but when the back ground is the same vividness, it makes the fore ground hard to make out. should fade the background just a touch...
I can tell that you have improved from the first few pages! So, keep it up! only one way to go from here, thats up!!!
Again Great Job! you should be proud!

Just a note I'm not a fan of shoen-ai.... I just like art!

evan if you are not a fan,thank you very much