http://www.drunkduck.com/Pokemon_Yellow_Comics

This is my Pokemon webcomic. It is drawn, but not in a strict manga style like pretty much every other drawn Pokemon comic, but more of a half-manga, half-cartoony style. it's hard to explain. it's based on the hit video game Pokemon Special Pikachu Edition, otherwise commonly known as Pokemon Yellow.

I would like some critique please, because 1: Out of all the comments i've ever had on PYC, only about 1 or 2 had critique in it 2: I know that my comic isn't perfect, but I'd like to help it get a tiny bit closer.

i like ur comic by the way. anyway, are there any programs that can help me improve my comic design. i dont want to pay or have to do a trial, just a free download

hey it's better than mine.

Looks good. Colour works, jokes are funny, and it's actually a drawn pokemon comic.

It's good overall.

Not bad. Some backgrounds would be nice.

Yeh i think its good too not much i can crit bout that

so far, so good! I dont see anything wrong. its better than what I can do