Ok, first things first. I think your comic is clipping along pretty good. There is a definite satirical streak to it and it makes a lot of fun of some of the tried and true conventions of the genre. I like it.
The animation in the panels is something I don't think I've ever seen before. It's a nice touch.
I guess my only complaint (and it's to be expected in a T+ comic, I suppose), is the language is a little coarse sometimes. But overall, a very impressive work.
"Perhaps you would care to try your villany on a less defenseless opponent?"--Kung Fu Rabbit
Thanks a lot for the critique, RabbitMaster. I really appreciate it.
I hadnât realized the language was coarse â I actually thought it was nothing worse than whatâs seen on primetime TV. But thanks for letting me know.
Today markâs Ninja Shizatchâs 50th âofficialâ page, as well as the end of Book 2.
Rock-solid anatomy, dynamic page layouts, and I'm loving the animated SFX.
One thing I think needs work is the inking - try to get some line weight variation in there, I think it will help making the stuff look even more dynamic. And I'd try cel shading instead of gradients, I think it would befit your style better.