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Jul 2,`07 12:31am | Quote |

Ten no Ken: Sword of Heaven (probably NSFW- loads of violence and swearing)
"Justice at the point of a sword, if by 'justice' you mean 'anarchy'."

My magnum opus about a ronin with complete disregard for the law. It starts off as a simple quest for an artifact of unimaginable power, but it evolves into something more.
In the meantime, you can enjoy it as a smorgasbord of mindless gore, action, and wicked awesome characters. It takes a lot of its cues from rock music and heavy metal, and has a definite shonen manga/graphic novel influence. I like to think of it as Rurouni Kenshin meets Hellboy, except with more fighting and- for the moment- less substance.

That said, if you're gonna critique (please do!), lay off the story points for now. You can bash my writing all you want, but the story is being taken in a different direction as we speak, and judging it as it is would not really be fair. Anything else is fair game.
And if you mention proportions, I'm gonna get a little miffed, to say the least. All of the proportions in there are the way they are because that's the way I wanted them, end of story. You can critique them all you want, but I probably won't listen, so, fair warning.

*pray someone actually reads this this time around*

Oh, and for the love of Zombie Jesus, if you like the comic, leave comments on it, and recommend it to people! Please!

This post was last edited on Jul 2,`07 12:40am


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