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Jun 8,`07 6:49pm | Quote |

Okay, I've really been dreading putting up the '[CRIT]' for this... Well here goes.

Summery: Follow the adventures of the dark witch Meryl and her werewolf minion Gin as they fend off overly affectionate vampires, rival witches, dangerous dungeons and annoying village kids looking for adventure.

Currently at a total 40 pages as of 6-08-07.

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Jul 22,`07 3:55am | Quote |

Okay let's try this again... Maybe I might hear from someone this time.

54 pages as of July 20th.

 
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Jul 22,`07 5:07pm | Quote |

Your strip is one of my favorites, so that's never a bad thing. The flow and pacing are great, the art is good, and the dialog is well written. As for something negative, the characters' actions are somewhat predictable. For example, I was expecting the kids to stow away in some manner in this latest arc. However, I don't see it as a major problem right now but keep it in mind as the comic progresses.

 
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Jul 22,`07 6:37pm | Quote |

Great job man. I can't think of anything bad about this comic.

I love the character development.

BlkKnight said: "the characters' actions are somewhat predictable."
I find that It's good for people to feel that your Character's actions are predictable.

I can't wait to see Gin turn into a Wolf!!!!

 
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Jul 23,`07 11:27pm | Quote |

I'm not saying that predictability is a bad thing. However, if at comic 300 the kids are still being told not to go with Gin and Meryl and they stow away for the fifth time, then it might be getting old. I was honestly pulling at strings for something negative.

 
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Jul 24,`07 2:14pm | Quote |

Wow, I'm glad to hear you guys like it. And don't worry about the predictability thing BlkKnight. It's not going to be a repetative thing like that. The story and characters will grow with each situation.

Man, this awesome. I love hearing what you guys think.

 
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Jul 25,`07 9:17am | Quote |

I love that strip It's funny and it always gets at least a smile out of me


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