http://www.drunkduck.com/zero7rebirth/index.php?p=184517

THis was originally going to be a remake of my first comic, but I decided to end it cause it would take too long to get to the point where I was in the original. There's not much, but please tell me how I can further improve my style for future pages! Thanks again for the time.

due to complaints, I changed the music. What do you think?