I revised it, hopefully it's better. I'd be happy if there was critique and such. I really want to improve.

Even though there aren't a lot of pages right now, it should be an improvement of the first version. Many events are related to literature, any kind of literature, so don't be too surprise if there are quotes that seem familiar.

Quikie Summary :P :Jenn, a young mage, who isn't able to do basic magic, is given a letter to deliver during a war between the Immortals and Humans. However, for some strange reason, everyone wants that letter! What's so special about it anyways; could it be a solution to end this terrible war?

http://www.drunkduck.com/Lumimaria/