http://www.drunkduck.com/Yamete_Kudasai/
(I can't get it to do the link and I don't know what type of codes this forum uses)

Just looking for some constructive criticism or tips for my comic.. I usually do one a week plus occasional extras (like today)
I use a crow pen (mainly) with ink and have recently been using tones on the computer.
I draw it in my own style, but occasionally it takes on the charictaristics of the manga style
The focus is on the two nearly naked men and the panda traveling through the hole dimension. It is a hole. Innovative!


What I do know:
-I should be doing backgrounds (The hole dimension is just black space, but the space in which the other characters are should be more defined)
-My writing might be hard to read (please tell me if it is!)

I don't know, I guess that's it... Let me know if there are any suggestions on layout, timing, or any other things yoou notice! ^^;

Like so:

http://www.drunkduck.com/Yamete_Kudasai/

You have to put "['url']['/url']" around it (sans the quotation marks)

Thanks, chaosgoat ^^;

Thanks for your help everyone

Hmm, I think the comic's pretty interesting. What I would try is makin the ink a little bit darker. If you have Photoshop, you may want to try the 'Auto Color' option. Maybe ik it a bit thicker to make te lines more visible, so when you shrink it, you can still make the characters out...
But that's only my opinion. ^-^'

Thanks doubly!
-I'll see about darkening the ink
-thanks for taking time to take a look and help me ^^

*PSST* YAMETE KUDASAI RULES!!! *has a freak out and dies*