So, I'd like to get thoughts. I know the backgrounds are shaky, but that's on purpose, so please don't say that unless you really think it hurts the comic THAT much. I'd like to hear feedback on character expressions, dialogue, and layout.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Dax_and_Deo/

Oh come on, guys, I know I'm pretty much awesome, but give it a try