Okay I know there isn't much there yet,(4 pages) but I worked really really hard on this comic and I am an attention whore, so putting two and two together, I would really like some feedback on this.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Prototype_Cho/index.php?p=161594

Awesome.

Thanks.

Needless but rare bump.

I must say your art is spectacular, I love the style!

You said this was a one-shot for a contest, does this have more pages?

Yes, 20 total to be exact.

Thank you very much, FAL. Your work is also splendid. I think you can probably draw better than I can. o3o

Thanks! I envy your use of contrast, my style is almost the opposite as I don't shade.
I'm looking forward to seeing more pages. Got you totally fave'd!

Why certainly.
And I think what you do without shading works very well for your style. *nod*

Thanks again.

You should have won. This is some of the best use of negative space I've seen since Frank Miller. And it's a manga, to boot. I'm faving this and eagerly awaiting the rest.

I hope you go on to create more comics like this one. I'd read 'em.

Oh gosh thank you! ^^
That really means a lot for me to hear. <3
Especially from you, I love your clean sharp style myself.

Ahem. A bump, only because I've had a new page up and it's gotten very little attention and I nearly killed myself over it... ^^;

This comic is excellent! I really like the style. ^^

Wow that was some great stuff. When I looked at the cover page, the first words out of my mouth were "holy sh-". Great art, great story, great job.