So far, it's great! Great art, great colors, and great timing. But never explain your jokes. It makes you seem hesitant about your humor, and a joke is never funny after someone has to explain it to you. People either get it, or they don't. But yours is funny, and if they don't, then it's their own fault.

Noted. I know mt friend didn't get it, so it's more of a side note then anything else. If you don't understand, go ahead and look deeper-sort of thing.

It's really great stuff you got there