Hi everyone! $5 Fate (that's its proper title, DD wouldn't let me use the '$'so I just had to use 'five dollar' Is on two week haitus while I'm writing my college essays. So I'd thought I'd take this chance and ask for some critical feedback for what you'd like to see in my comic. Any feedback would be helpful! Thanks!

http://www.drunkduck.com/Five_Dollar_Fate/