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Oct 8,`06 3:58am | Quote |

It's reached the first 50 pages!

After having plugged my comic some time ago, I decided that my art isn't going to improve if I don't allow constructive critiques as well. Well please go easy on me because this is my first attempt at trying to draw a webcomic... I've been using a few inking styles in my comic so far... I know my first few pages is a horror.. >_<

so what I want to know is..

- Am i improving?

- Is there anything I could do to try and improve my art even more?

- Which style I used did you find most comfortable with reading?
(There's the marker style in chapter 1 and the pencil style in chapter 2... and there's this one page in Chapter 1 where I used liquid ink to ink the page instead]

- Should I continue using different inking styles to allow more variation? (watercolour? Liquid inks? Markers? in Corel Painter?)

- How am I doing overall (give an overall idea of how you think my comic is.. like perhaps I have a tendency to draw necks that are too long thoughout the whole comic so far?)


Please go here
Thank you for your time.

This post was last edited on Oct 8,`06 3:59am

 
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Oct 10,`06 1:11am | Quote |

I love the way you use screentones

 
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Oct 10,`06 5:55am | Quote |

thank you! but should i keep up with my current style? or should i change it?

 
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Oct 10,`06 12:19pm | Quote |

looks good the way it is now imo ^_^


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