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Sep 8,`06 10:41pm | Quote |

My first webcomic - it used to be an animated flash series.

Three samurais set off on an epic quest, all the while parodying popular RPGs, satirizing a variety of themes, and just generally kicking some sweet, sweet ninja behind.

I'm tooling this webcomic to suit my readers - any comments or suggestions will be seriously considered, in regards to plot, characters, setting - ANYTHING, really. In other words, comments are greatly appreciated.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Ninja_Shizatch/index.php?p=86567

 
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Sep 9,`06 9:52am | Quote |

Dude your comic ROCKS!!

At first glance i thought it was really cliched, but from the moment I started reading the dialog, I knew it was all parody. Your jokes do have a bit of an 8 bit theatre feel to it though.

Apart from that your art is just sexy.

So awsome comic, keep it up.

 
Anonymous
Sep 9,`06 3:12pm | Quote |

Haha, it's funny and well done. That jade Ninja is smokin'!

.: MisterZubair :.

 
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Sep 10,`06 11:22am | Quote |

O_O THE ARTWORK IS AMAZING!!!! O_O

I LOVE your use of flash on this page:
http://www.drunkduck.com/Ninja_Shizatch/index.php?p=86598

Sorry, man, but I don't know how to critique it. It's funny, the artwork's awesome, and you amazed me right off the bat. It's pretty hard to get me amazed. Or not...

Well... I can't critique it. I just can't.


This year, school's full of BS!!!
 
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Sep 10,`06 1:58pm | Quote |

Wow, thanks for all the great comments.

As for the Flash, I plan on making greater use of it in the future... Audio voice-overs, music, who knows... As long as I can keep the filesize small.

 
Anonymous
Sep 10,`06 2:10pm | Quote |

PAGE 3 = WIN!

.: equinox :.

 
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Sep 10,`06 3:15pm | Quote |

really nice comic. Art is good, and action packed.


 
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Sep 25,`06 5:49pm | Quote |

QUOTE:
PAGE 3 = WIN!

Thanks; hopefully you'll feel the same way about future pages.

QUOTE:
really nice comic. Art is good, and action packed.

Thanks. I notice some comics will go several pages/strips without any action, so I'm going to try to go no more than 2 pages without any random violence.

 
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Oct 30,`06 5:58pm | Quote |

Says not to plug more than once per month... Well over a month has passed since my last post in this thread.

Any critiques, now that I have a few more pages up? Anything at all, really.


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