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Aug 22,`06 5:33pm | Quote |

(Not sure how to start or what to say, but I'm supposed to do this aren't I? Oh well...)

Butterfly Blue:
http://www.drunkduck.com/Butterfly_Blue/

The story: The main character Isodel is sick and is having trouble staying awake. While she is sleeping, the characters from the story she daydreams about are on a quest to save her. (A larger summary is at the top of the page of the website)

goal for story: To present mainly stereotyped sort of characters and transform them into different people entirely during the course of the comic. (A character study. haha.) To also not turn every side character into a main character (I have a terrible habit with that).

The art: manga-influenced. Heavily. Has some realistic qualities. In pen and pencil but computer blended to look more watercolor-like.

goal for art: To become more consistant. To make it pretty. (To learn to actually draw well...meh...)

As for warnings or stuff, I tend to stay away from foul language and sexual themes. (in fact, expect a minimum of romance from me) There is blood and some gory images.

Well, that's it. I hope I was thorough enough and did it correctly.

Now I'm nervous. :oops:

 
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Aug 22,`06 6:10pm | Quote |

I'm brand new myself, but I must say, the idea for the story is very moving, and your execution of it thus far is overwhelmingly good. I can tell you're moving forward with every page, in both storytelling and artistic skill, which is all anyone could ever ask for.

Congratulations, you've got yourself another fan. :D

 
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Aug 23,`06 2:12pm | Quote |

Thank you for such kind words. *gives cookie*

(Really helped my nerves, I'll tell you. This whole thread scares me to tears.)

 
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Aug 23,`06 2:45pm | Quote |

I love the original idea, very good. I always welcome reading a comic with a deep plot.
I also like very much the pencils.

 
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Aug 23,`06 3:54pm | Quote |

Terrific plot idea.

<= dead and buried.
 
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Aug 23,`06 4:17pm | Quote |

Thank you both. ^__^


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