http://www.drunkduck.com/Why

So, there is this new webcomic titled "Why", and it is a shortstory about a man who finds out that he has only few minutes left to live. I dont want to say more regarding the plot.

However, if possible, I would like a critique on page 2, espectially the coloring; like, dislike, tips to make it better (photoshop coloring) etc. That would be very helpful. (of course, if there is anything else that bugs you regarding the page, let me know)

The reason why there is such a huge difference between page 1 and 2 is that I originally planned it to be watercolored, but the scanner made it ugly (dont look at me, the scanner did it

The updating schedule is on wednesdays (at least at the moment

Thanks in advance.

To me, I see a 2 different interpretations of this page that may or may not confuse people:

1. I see someone laying in the back of a van
2. I see someone pressed against a wall and the floor is open under him (as if he was in some type of play or something)

In order to clear this confusion, the bottom should show some background. If it is the back of a van, there should be indication of the outside are (trees, street signs, etc.) so the white part isn't just left to the imagination. You can get the stronger effect by adding trees and just making a deep fog over it or if you are trying to go for number 2 (the ground is open under him like he was in a plane or something), you might want a couple of clouds in there.