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May 29,`06 11:29pm | Quote |

Well, finally started chapter 5 and have got a few pages in. This is an epic fantasy/sci-fi adventure, so be ready for the long haul.



http://warofwinds.com

 
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May 31,`06 11:31pm | Quote |

BWAH HAH HAH!!! Okay, now it's about 55% shinier. And sparkly---but that's only the reflection of moonlight off the blood. Don't let the shiny part fool you. It ain't a froof comic.

 
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Jun 3,`06 12:24am | Quote |

Comic update! First real update in a month, check it out!

 
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Jun 4,`06 5:53pm | Quote |

Ooo, and another! Kinda proud of this page *pets* Check it out! Click da siggy!

 
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Jun 7,`06 7:17pm | Quote |

Cast Q update! Readers get to send in questions to characters, and they get answered every wednesday. This week's question was asked of Ravar (the tough guy), "what's your favorite flower?" I find it amusing. The link to the question can be found on the main page, in the news box beneath the comic.

 
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Jun 29,`06 1:25am | Quote |

My newest page took over 12 hours to complete. I hereby declare this thread open for pimpage season, while I go a finally get some shuteye.

 
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Jul 13,`06 7:39pm | Quote |

I've reopened tWoW's DD mirror. http://www.drunkduck.com/The_War_of_Winds/

Crit if you can, but of course, go and check it out!

 
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Aug 27,`06 5:53pm | Quote |

I've got a foot in the door to chapter 5, so I figured it was time for another pimp. The top post has been edited with an image.

 
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Aug 27,`06 6:20pm | Quote |

Dude...we can forgive you for double posting, triple posting is bad but forgiveable, quadruple posting is REALLY stupid...but 8 posts in a row? Let some other people post here, dude...

 
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Aug 27,`06 7:05pm | Quote |

Try looking at the dates of the posts. They are weeks apart. So, rather than creating new threads, I'm simply reusing the same one. Got a problem with it? I don't give a care.

 
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Aug 27,`06 9:13pm | Quote |

You really need to work on the positioning of your people - they look like stiff robots in some panels.

Nice work overall :-D

 
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Aug 28,`06 12:10pm | Quote |

Yeah I do agree with the above post. Good start, but my basic advice is to focus on your line work a little bit more, then work on your coloring. But it's definatly very nice, I personally like how you're trying to develop your style. ^_^ Keep up the high quatlity work.


 
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Aug 28,`06 12:19pm | Quote |

I like the story so far.... it's certainly very intersting! ^_^

I'm on hitatus while I redo one of my webcomics. Be sure to check it out when I'n done!
 
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Aug 28,`06 3:04pm | Quote |

Thanks for checking it out all.

carly_mizzou: my line work has always been pretty mediocre, but unfortuntately, most of it is caused by the rush to get the pages up. I once put up page uncolored with better lines, and a buncha people had a hissy fit. :lol: I guess the color is well-liked. I also need to get like, art pens. I using cheap gel pens at the moment, 'cause well, college takes all my money

hat: uh oh, that's not what I like to hear. Could you point out a page where they look so stiff? Lately I've been trying to add a lot more movement to my pages, but I know there are a lot of nuances I haven't picked up yet. And I know the beginning pages are pretty much horrible, and they all look so stiff, but I hope my current work is better.

Aurora Moon: Thanks^^ I hope you continue to check back.


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