so far the third chapter is just being started :D
please tell me what you think

click here to begin!
http://www.drunkduck.com/Leo/?p=27695

This actually has a very nice, classic, early-90's shonen manga look to it (Dragonball, etc) and I don't know if that's on purpose or not but I find it pleasing.

EDIT: Reading more, the Toriyama influence is obvious.

I myself usually draw eyes and head shapes the way he does, so I can relate.

Its not bad I agree with Tater Salad that it has this nostalgic feel. The story is not so bad too XD Keep it up! :-D

Definitely nostalgic, just not my cup of tea though. However, it is great and very reminiscent of the old DB stuff so more power to ya.

.: MisterZubair :.

hey thanks for taking a look. yea my influence come out heavily on my artwork. after 6 years of drawing its evolved in a way thats familiar to me. i guess it looks too much like dragonball? i either get that, or one piece (chapter 3)

but yea, thanks for the comments 8)