I figured I would make a forum for the individual story arcs of Pure Soul. I've drafted the story to be told in five seperate story arcs. This first one (Introductions of the characters), the second one (A Battle Royale story), the third one (Montori's story), the fourth one (Mati's Story), and the final one (Dito's story). So I figured I'd post a forum about this first arc. Please post ANY comments you have about the story. I really want to know what you think about my writing and art.