Arthur King (54 - Reminisce)

Rutger

Cross-posting Commentary Extravaganza!

Four updates today:
Life finally had a proper update again, continuing the hunt for Lynne!
Fridge Pals was updated after ages of waiting. It isn't much, but it shows that the comic isn't dead yet, so it's at least something.
Even Sketching Reality has had an addition, portraying my character from Improbable Island!
And last, but certainly not least, Arthur has been updated! It's a recap, but it's a fresh start that's not going to end!

As far as updates concern, I'm going to update Arthur and Fridge Pals every sunday from now on. Life will be daily for as much as possible, depending on how busy work and real life gets. Sketching Reality will remain, as always, a dump for random art, so it'll update randomly.

-Posted on Mar 01, 2008

User: Rutger

Thing is, I don't have a storyboard. Plus, I'd rather be the one to get Arthur back on track. Once it gets going again, I'll probably do just as you suggested...but y'know, the new start is kind of an emotional thang.
-Posted on Jun 03, 2008

User: Deathbeamz

i could do the comics for youz if you would send me teh storyboard and teh sprites
-Posted on Jun 02, 2008

User: bbr

Busy busy ?

You could post "next week's" storyboard, then ask if anyone wants to draw it for you, and post it as a guest comic / update.
-Posted on May 31, 2008

User: Rutger

Hey, if you wanna trade lives so I can update on sundays, be my guest. I could use a break.
-Posted on Apr 16, 2008

User: Deathbeamz

so... every sunday, eh?
-Posted on Apr 15, 2008

User: edbang 5

You give me hope Rutger... Sprite comics can be pretty awesome.

The story is interesting and the Sprite edits are inspiring and well done.

This reminds me of all those adventure video games I've played countless hours and quarters for just to see the ending...

well done!

What I think would help improve this comic, is to add panel Variation. Do not be satisfied with the same panel layout for every comic.

Try taking a page out of the Calvin and Hobbes comic strip. Watterson did all sorts of cool things with panel layout in such a small space. The big page you did a couple of strips back was good, but if you can't sustain that then you can still do a lot with the space you have.

After reading so many strips in one shot... it gets a bit visually boring for me, even with the scene changes... Anyways good luck and keep up the good work!
-Posted on Mar 19, 2008