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Testing out some new font, as someone asked me to do.
Today (as you can tell) has been really boring, so I was able to make 3 of these today, I doubt I'll be getting many out during the week...
But anyways, this is a new font and a pokeball test.
-Posted on Feb 01, 2009

User: soonmme

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Borders between the panels tends to be a good idea.
The sprite is resized horribly, in paint, go to stretch& skew(resize/skew for vista), and use intervals of 100(200, 300, etc).
The style is clashing, use frlg sprite with frlg backgrounds, etc.
The current style of doing bubbles is stupid and confusing
The story's pace is way to fast, slow that shit down.
The dialog is crap, too.

This isn't everything that's wrong, of course, but this is what we should start with.
If you(or anyone else) needs help with anything, feel free to contact me, info on profile.
-Posted on Feb 01, 2009

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