DELETED SCENE! Chapter 1 Page 1
Macattack on March 1, 2012
So, as many of you probably know, I've been taking a break from Wireless to focus on rewriting chapter 1 as well as hopefully finish this term. While looking through the mismatch of the old script I found this page which was the alternate way I was intending to open the story.
I ended up choosing the Tech Inc opening instead as I thought the story was going to revolve more around Kyle's city and school and such than Kyle himself. Now that I think of it I'm kind of sorry I didn't choose this opening as I kind of like the idea of a story based around the civilians in a superhero world vs the super heroes themselves. So hope you like it
Random superhero is just something I made up in 3 seconds... we'll call him the Crimson Tornado.... DON"T SUE ME DC!