| User: Abt_Nihil | | 5 | | I agree with everyone - the dialogue feels natural and the exposition is necessary, on top of that it's f***ing awesome! -Posted on Mar 11, 2010 | | User: SympleSymon | | 5 | | Wordiness is good when it's in the right place - like here! -Posted on Mar 09, 2010 | | User: plymayer | | 5 | -Posted on Mar 07, 2010 | | User: El Cid | | 5 | | It's okay to be wordy, since you're establishing the mission. I like how you're combining genres here. It's an international political drama as well as a superhero action comic. -Posted on Mar 06, 2010 | | User: AzuJOD | | 5 | -Posted on Mar 06, 2010 | | User: DAJB | | 5 | -Posted on Mar 05, 2010 | | User: khard12 | | 5 | -Posted on Mar 05, 2010 | | User: fukujinzuke | | 5 | I think the "wordiness" was a necessity. I mean, they (the entire team) are being briefed, so of course it's only natural that a lot of dialog would be expected to happen, and the readers have to get the picture with all the info to set the situation. You handled that well.
I think the only crit I've got on this page is that the table top on panel 3 looks uncomfortably close, but I think you can do a quick fix-it layer for that on PS. -Posted on Mar 05, 2010 | | User: Legend Comics | | 5 | | I like how you add detail with just colour. Will you ever reveal a page with just ink? -Posted on Mar 05, 2010 | | User: Nepath | | 5 | -Posted on Mar 05, 2010 | | User: Hero | | 5 | -Posted on Mar 05, 2010 | |
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In the near future, a small team of genetically engineered meta-humans defend our country's interests at home and abroad...They are the Vanguard.
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