I'm not crazy about panel 1, but I enjoy the rest of this page, so lets pretend it doesn't exist. :-P No worries. I am aware of what sucks in that panel and have applied my lessons to future pages. A failure learned from is a success.
Originally I wanted to fit in Mike commenting about "plan B," but I couldn't work it into the script. Plus, it seemed more true to character to have him run off without a word.
Warpedwenger: Thanks.
ghostrunner: Heh. At four, I didn't even have a water gun! I had to go out and buy my own toy gun when I was older, so I could play spies.
roycemarie: That would be a strange role for Seiko indeed! XD
patrick & JNP: I thought that, but I didn't mention it, because I was hoping it was just me. :X I liked the page otherwise, but if that was distracting enough to warrant commentary, I consider it a failure. Back to the drawing board.
Peipei: Flightless armed bird. ~_^
Tantz: Nah. She was way off the mark.
amanda: That's a bad habit! Go get a manicure. ;-)
Jonko & DAJB: You never heard of a Shotgun Finch? XD
I got a manicure once, and the entire time, they kept saying, "Are you suuuuuuuure you don't want a pedicure?" And since I was wearing open-toed shoes, it made me really self-conscious =D I did *not* get a pedicure, however.
