this is pro, i'd love to see this on a shelf some day, not only do you have talent, but you've made it your own. haha, though i'm sure it makes me sound like an old tit, that's something VERY respectable this day in age. i'm addin ya.
read through all the pages thus far and commented and responded...you have a super kick ass style...looking forward to seeing more...the intro seemd a little short and confusing but that can be always tweaked...great job!