| Comments | | | EmoGrl | | Made these for friend... -Posted on Aug 05, 2009 |
| | User: ReaperEX | | | | Oh yeah, I forgot to add on as well, if you need guidance in making Customs or whatever, my forums have a good tutorial for doing so. Go to AL and check it out if you wish! -Posted on Aug 11, 2009 | | User: ReaperEX | | 5 | You asked for my assistance, so after a long hiatus I'm back.
For how long? Dunno.
Anywho, my little thing of your comic?
Pretty good, for a Sonic comic.
1. More custom/edit sprites are needed, the less they look like the originals the better.
2. Use normal black text and outline your boxes accordingly, then use tails to connect them to who says them (don't make either of those cover your characters!)
3. Self-Portrayals are overdone, sorry. I suggest you get an original character (Take Lucas Buchanon or Alex Legend, or any of my characters for that fact, none of them are real people or actual characters from a game).
This is just a pointer, it's your choice to follow it or not: Using actual game characters from Sonic etc. isn't such a good thing, having your own is better.
That's all! Your comic has no serious flaws, not like most on DD, and that's a great thing. Grammar and Spelling is great, way to go!
I really only truly suggest changing some small things in your comic, or than that, keep at it!
A five from yours truly, since you did so well for a beginner! -Posted on Aug 11, 2009 |
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