Twisted Mirrors (Ch. 11 Page 16)

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dragonsong12

ANOTHER scene change? What's that all about, Dragonsong? You need to go back to editing school, you should know better than to keep randomly cutting like this!
Sheesh!
Though I have to admit, I think you did a decent job in the first panel. Feels kinda like a woods for once.

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...anyway...I think there are some interesting things on this page (no, really!) but I think I over-explain things a lot of the time, so I'll just sit on my hands for once...well...as much as I can....since I'm typing...

Thanks for reading! See you next week!

-Posted on Nov 16, 2009

User: kaiyaweird 5

Can't wait for the next page!
-Posted on Nov 19, 2009

User: SweetSong 5

Personally, I like how you keep skipping between the characters. It gives a strong sense of simultaneous-ness.
-Posted on Nov 17, 2009

User: theorah 5

-Posted on Nov 17, 2009

User: Mikato 5

Poor Bradley he isnt doing too good.
-Posted on Nov 16, 2009

User: HiNaTa_fan_13 5

-Posted on Nov 16, 2009

User: Cthonic Cultist

Bradley isn't looking well. Perhaps a bit of a lie down would help, hmm?
-Posted on Nov 16, 2009

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