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| Nalver | Uhm..
I guess I was okay until panel 5. I'm sorry. I'm very very tired.
Anyway, if you have the decency to overlook the suckiness here, I give you my gratitude.
I guess this ends the prologue. I'm doing the Chapter 1 Cover now >> It and Page 1 should be up tomorrow. -Posted on May 13, 2009 |
| | User: xVegitox | | 5 | Its a bit TOO hard to see what the mother is saying... fix that up buddy.
6th panel sorta got me hyped for next chaptet cause it looks cool.
And you should have used a different background for the 5th panel though still looks good. Style up your speech bubbles, and get different focus angles here. Like have some zoom in zoom out stuff y'know that way its more fun to look at =D -Posted on May 13, 2009 | | User: Nalver | | | | Gawd, it looks hideous >> -Posted on May 13, 2009 |
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