Yup. Just started to read Eragon and I'm noticing so much that I didn't get the first time!
No, I wasn't stuck on his bishi-ness, I was stuck on the writing style. It was like "I am Sal. I have red hair and blue eyes." Or like "See Spot. See Spot run." Just... kinda simplistic, which fits with the fact that this book was made by a 15 year old.
The writing style does get "better", as in Christopher Paolini goes through his "I must be taken seriously, so I'll put in a bunch of big words and long sentences that no one can understand!" phase. :/ Don't worry, we all go through this as writers.
I just have to be patient.
This will be a daily comic that I'll upload as soon as I can. It'll either be daily, or it'll be when I get to the interesting part. Either one.
Hope you enjoy.
EDIT: Edited the misspelled word (points if you got it) Will upload the next page in the morning. I'm tired now. -Posted on Oct 20, 2009 |
