| | User: Walrus | | 3 | 1. Needs speechbubbles.
2.And get rid of the last panel.
3. There is a lot of blank space in panel 5 and almost as much in panel one.
4. The panels are to small, enlarge them and the characters.
5. There are 493 Pokemon in case you didn't know, use any of them except for the 12 starters.
6. This page is also a bit to small. -Posted on Jan 02, 2008 | | User: KevinClifford | | | I'm also the first person to critique pokémon comics...
Too many people start at 9 PM :-/ -Posted on May 07, 2007 | | User: Sea_Cow | | 5 | | Criticism from Kevin on your first comic page. Ouch. CONSTRUCTIVE, true, but criticism nonetheless. Don't worry; That's not all you'll get. -Posted on May 06, 2007 | | User: KevinClifford | | | Okay, here we go:
1.) Resize. It's to small to see the characters, or anything :( Make sure you only use stretch/skew (with an image Select-All'd) in the stretch enter field, and only with numbers that end in 00 (like 200, 300, etc.)
2.) Use real textboxes, don't have the text next to an image of who's talking. Use the one's that a normal comic uses. You can't put it there for one reason, and one reason only. The panels are so bloody small :(
And lastly: 3.) Do not use starters. Starters make an author fail at life, be original.
4.) Your characters need emotions. Emotions are normally easier to put on them if they are enlarged.
Hope this helped :D -Posted on May 06, 2007 | | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here!
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