i haven't exactly gotten the whole plot in, so just wait for a few days until i do. until then, here's pretty much what started the idea of putting me, my bf, and my best friend in the same apartment. let's just say, hell, it was all our idea. i'll post character bios when i get the chance, or when i'm lazy. anyway, enjoy what i have now!
The guy is Tyler, and the chick is Michelle. Sadly, i'm not in it! waha. yeah. enjoy. sorta
Hahah, very clever. The expressions really help to bring the joke forth. I think you would benefit from a background, even if it's purely atmospheric in nature (like "surprise" lines around Tyler when he shouts).
Right now, though, I just have to object to the painful blue you have as your site background. Something a bit less intense would be a bit easier on the eyes.