| | User: Darkmax | | 5 | -Posted on Nov 03, 2006 | | User: Garwik | | 4 | | Ha! This looks interesting. -Posted on Aug 15, 2006 | | User: mackmm | | 5 | | Yeah I was the same way with a couple of my strips a few months ago, they seemed fine to me but after my sister read them she said she understood them, but had problems with the text bubbles. I found out it messes up the flow of a cartoon if they have to rearrange them or put them in an order their not accustomed to. cartoon becomes non flowing. -Posted on Aug 15, 2006 | | User: mackmm | | | | Yeah I was the same way with a couple of my strips a few months ago, they seemed fine to me but after my sister read them she said she understood them, but had problems with the text bubbles. I found out it messes up the flow of a cartoon if they have to rearrange them or put them in an order their not accustomed to. cartoon becomes non flowing. -Posted on Aug 15, 2006 | | User: SilverBlackwolf | | 3 | I agree the bubbles are a little hard to follow.
Still like the comic very much. -Posted on Aug 14, 2006 | | User: Debris | | 4 | | This looks pretty good. But I would just suggest moving the speach bubbles around, especially in the 3rd panel. Jay says stop then gram starts talking then stops. a little off -Posted on Aug 12, 2006 | | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here!
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