01: Connor's dream
Hamorhage on Feb. 25, 2006
heya,
This is an update..although this is actually the intro of the comic I'm drawing. If you remember Connor woke up from a dream (which i first did with pictures)..well I changed it into this dream, a 3 page intro. Confused? ye it'snormal let's just say this is page 1 of the comic and you havent read the rest.
Ay aya y...I must be the worst online cartoonist ever :)
*edit* I changed it a little bit, so hopefully he looks less female..and if he still does...hey it's a dream...we all dream things a bit mroe female then they really are...ahem :)
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Darwin at 6:55AM, May 16, 2006
Wow...
carvajal at 11:41PM, April 29, 2006
very nice page!
Green_Tangerine at 9:22AM, Feb. 28, 2006
Eee I had this dream once! Not really, but it'd be pretty terrifying.
ozoneocean at 3:46PM, Feb. 27, 2006
Good work man ^_^
subcultured at 3:04PM, Feb. 27, 2006
my gawd! i think yer channeling stan winston! that last panel is beyond fierceness
Hamorhage at 12:08PM, Feb. 27, 2006
thx ozone for the tips...couldnt spot it myself, so I cut some parts of his waist and made his chest flatter and less high up! maybe next time I really should articulate his ***..but I wanted to keep this open for children :)
ozoneocean at 10:51AM, Feb. 27, 2006
Ah-ha! Well no worries them Ham. In the 2nd panel he could [i]still[/i] be a man thats fine. In the 4th panel what you need to do is lower his pectoral muscles a little, reduse the deffinition under them a bit to make them flatter and then make his hips slimmer. That's a very important feature. Men typically have very slim hips compared to their shoulder width. Apart from that its a perfect, spot on, fantastic page!
Hero at 8:43AM, Feb. 27, 2006
Very creep-a-delic. You do the monster thing very well. And, for what it's worth I could tell it's a man.(Or rather assumed.) The facial structure reminds me of these pictures of native something or others I saw.
Hamorhage at 11:44PM, Feb. 26, 2006
PS: The person drawn is actually a man with long hair..Probably I need to retouch panel 2, to make him look more manly :) Sigh...back to the drawingboard. Thanks for the feedback guys :)
kyupol at 11:10PM, Feb. 26, 2006
wish i could color like that...
WayneEnterprise at 9:26PM, Feb. 26, 2006
just astonishing
iagojester at 7:20PM, Feb. 26, 2006
You are NOT the worst online comic artist. You're just disjointed. Which can be okae since you're not getting paid and it'll work itself out someday... right? Of course right. This page is scary. I have a feeling I'm going to be saying that a lot for your comic. But really- it reminds me of a nightmare I can't place, but somehow feel attatched anyway.
coinilius at 5:44PM, Feb. 26, 2006
Oh the non-linear update schedule of this comic... Cory is right about the person being a little... hard to tell. I'm guessing a long haired man, though, since s/he seems to be packing some equipment. S/he also seems pretty flat chested in panel three... but I could be wrong. The action, lighting, textures etc look great, though :)
Mika_yi at 5:00PM, Feb. 26, 2006
O.O oh gorsh nooo! I'm ganna have ta cover my eyes here! seriously. that is one scary monster! yet I can't stop reading it....
BloodFusion at 3:48PM, Feb. 26, 2006
wow this is really great, really cool and well drawn. no prob about going back to the dream =P Kinda cool to see what he dreamt
ozoneocean at 3:14PM, Feb. 26, 2006
Amazing backgrounds Ham! The image in the 2nd panel is brilliant. Perfect lighting on her face! Beautiful textue and lighting all over this page. Cory is only really talking about the 4th pannel. And he's got a point there: if she really [i]is[/i] a woman (as I believe her to be), her breasts need to be a lot lower on her chest and you don't need any shaping on her groin unless you're putting dark pubic hair down there or a pair or undies. ^_^ Appart from that it's a perfect page!
CORY at 2:40PM, Feb. 26, 2006
It's kind of hard for me to tell, it could either be a poorly drawn woman, or a fairly well-drawn guy with long hair. Can you help me out here?
Mazoo at 2:35PM, Feb. 26, 2006
Oh yeah, you're the [i]worst[/i] hamorhage. Psh, I wish you could see me rolling my eyes. This art is amazing! I'm really anticipating the next page, this story is already a bit scary! If you want confusing, go check out Wasteland on DD. It's really good, but its really confusing too. :)
spaz at 2:12PM, Feb. 26, 2006
did someone hang a dog?